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Spelling errors

I can't approve your recent bio due to numerous errors in spelling. Please use a spellchecker program to look over all profiles you create or even make edits to in order to make a correct bio. We want the Marvel Encyclopedia to be as profession as possible. If you don't have a spellchecking program, you can get one by creating a Hotmail account or even searching for a free one online. --DragynWulf 15:05, 19 June 2006 (EDT)

Is this about the Swordsman or Micael? CrowHawkins

Masters of Evil and Quicksilver

When adding characters to teams, please make sure they are not already listed. Heinrich Zemo was already listed under Baron Zemo (Heinrich). So there was no need to add "Heinrich Zemo" to the list.
When adding text, please use correct grammer. Instead of saying "Magneto had seemed calmed her down" it should have been "Magneto seemed to have calmed her down" instead. I only approved the text you added for Quicksilver by mistake thinking it was the addition of the significant issue. Which deleted your addition for his significant issue, so if you'd like, please feel free to add it again. And just to let you know the year of that issue was 1965. --DragynWulf 15:13, 20 June 2006 (EDT)

all right. CrowHawkins

Swordsman (Jacques Duquesne)

Sorry that it has taken this long to look at the profile. It took me awhile to figure out how to check it over (still learning some Mod stuff, sorry). There are numerous errors to the profile. Here is a list of the problems:
Occupation: Deceased and Hero is not an occupation. Adventurer is considered to be the "Hero" version of "Criminal"
Powers: Mentioning his use of swords would go under Abilities and not powers
Citizenship: just name where he is from. No need to say he is deceased there.
And there are typos in the profile as well
Because of that it can't be approved. But feel free to fix the probelms and resubmit it. Again, sorry it has taken so long to check it out.
Helpful hint: If you know a character is deceased, then add the deceased category. It saves others from editing it just to add a category. Note that this is not a reason why it can't be approved, just mentioning it. --DragynWulf 03:27, 7 July 2006 (EDT)

"Use Links"

No I did not create that bio. mimicx35