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User talk:Krevaner

Krevaner, First, I have to say you submitted an impressive bit of text on Ultimate Spider-Man's abilities. However, it has some stuff that need to be addressed. First, you have some stats in there that I believe have not been established facts yet. For example, "Spider-Man is capable of lifting over ten tons under optimal conditions and at maximum exertion, in both a leg press or a bench press." "Broken bones also heal faster, probably 2 to 3 times faster than an average human." Spider-Man in the regular universe previously has been listed as capable of pressing 10 tons, but Ultimate Spider-Man, I believe, has not been documented in such detail. Second, it's rather verbose and the style some what colloquial. What I mean by that is it's conversational in style at times, which really isn't fitting for these Handbooks. Things like, "Though it sounds like it may be true" or "Not nearly as dramatic as, say, Wolverine's" or "a powerful punch can still leave him reeling." See if you can take out the facts that haven't been established yet, and extract out the conversational style.--MikeFichera 16:41, 26 March 2006 (EST)