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Topic deletion

I'm not the one who deleted the topic, but heres the explanation why it was deleted. "Typos, grammatical errors, debut incorrect" fix those and it might next time stick around. Also little tip when your post get deleted. Check recent changes page there should be deletion message and explanation why it was deleted. --Wezqu 07:56, 1 July 2006 (EDT)

SL33py, your Karima profile isn't being accepted due to minimal information and incorrect facts - it is known who transformed her into an Omega Prime Sentinel, also you have her first appearance wrong. Once these issues are addressed, it's likely the profile will be approved. --ComiX-Fan 08:10, 1 July 2006 (EDT)


Thanks a lot for your time. I'll check better next time. I understand the problems and I will adress them. sL33py 21:43, 1 July 2006 (GMT)

Nextwave

The Nextwave profile couldn't be approved due to typos. Not sure if you used a spellchecker on it or not. Using one should tell you where the mistake were made and can easily be corrected.
Also there is no need to mention genitals in the profile. Instead of saying "who has been burning with the need to mate since 1956, unfortunetly he has absolutely no genitals whatsoever. For this reason he started to destroy the city of Abcess, North Dakota.", simply saying "Their first enemy was a giant green lizard known as Fin Fang Foom who was unable to find a mate. Because of this he started to destroy the city of Abcess, North Dakota" sounds better. Not telling you that is how you have to say it, but some other way without using the word "genitals" is better.
Once you've corrected the typos and reworded that phrase, feel free to resubmit it and it should be approved. --DragynWulf 21:32, 4 July 2006 (EDT)

High School

Dude your in high School to sweet, how long have you been reading comics

For about 2 and half years I think. --sL33py 12:44, 12 July 2006 (EDT)

thats cool I ask just because i'm the only one in my high school that reads them so it is cool to meet another high schooler thats reads them