JackStamper member 5pts Nice story, but with some faults...chains that can hold Thor? Really? Also, you have to wonder, if one of the Reds isn't deliberately helping Thor: "This newcomer, whose scientific discovery we never tested will be thrown in a cell with all the others." 5 Minutes later: "Oh wait, all in one cell might not be a good idea. Well, they had time to exchange exposition, now put all of them in different cells, so nobody can see, what they are doing." Later: "We trapped Thor! Let's all go outside now, after not even a minute of capturing him, and erm...yeah, go fetch a superior officer. All of us."